Think of this....
Think of this in a movie or antimation.
The Famle/Male Antihero:
"It has been raining for days by now. The drops relentlessly beating down on those who dare to step out side. I can't even remeber how long I have been out here. Besides I don't care."
-The hero is slowly walking down the dark streets of the city, and stops under a sreet light-
The Famle/Male Antihero:
"You know it is just one of those days that you should have better stayed in bed."
-The hero lights a cigarette, inhaling, then exhales, letting the smoke slowly escape his/her mouth-
"In any case... I got a job to do..."
-The here walks on drawing his/her wepao from the inside of the long trench coat he/she is wearing. Headed for some tall building. Once the hero enters the building, flash back to the events that caused what is happening.-
Yeah that would totally work out. And I have to agree with Falonefal. This song could be used for many diffrent moods, depending on how thigns are said, this can go anywhere.
Great work! Keep it coming! I will be there to comment.
(I am kinda urged to make a voice acting reel with this song.)
ZG